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Acid Rain

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I don't want to get caught
in the acid rain
I'd rather see your base-like vain eyes
collide with it
shedding tears
of salt
and water
So, this is a poem that I think turned out good. The inspiration was a crazy quote from a friend of mine.

Comments and constructive criticism are always appreciated! :D
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somnomollior's avatar
I tried to come up with something but it was too hard at that moment, but I like where you went with it.
Shedding has two ds.