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Haiku - 29

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Published: Sep 27, 2010

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late winter's smell drips in the teacup

I know this is probably a one-image haiku (a monoku?) but anything I add into the poem makes it feel too "heavy". I don't know, I glad how it turned out, though.

Comments and constructive criticism are always appreciated!

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I think you are right to leave it standing on its own. It is an original and potent image.