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Haiku - 7

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late for work --
below his desk
mismatched shoes
Comments and constructive criticism are always appreciated!
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SOLARTS
This is great - but I feel it is more of a senryu than a haiku - not that I am critiquing it for this. Just a thought.

Funny. Satisfying.

:)