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the piano keys
open my mind
slow surrender
the wintery sunrise
resonates in my head
baroque music
guitar's sound
in my ears
cloudy weather
raindrops
he can't hear
notes
daily routine
the sound of cars
mix with Bach
winter routine
notes freezing before
reaching his ear
bad habits
the music goes on
yelling at him
hearing music
to escape his problems
good habits
musical training
the pianist singing
an old discussion
fast notes
the pianist
fainting
fast notes
he can't hide
his tears
tears flow
like raindrops
falling notes
more raindrops
the pianist plays
his piano louder
counterpoint
the fugue above
that discussion
a singing bird
falls from his nest
requiem
car accident
the coda of his life
clearly seen
playing music
he ends it
in the wrong key
breaking up the harmony
of their relationship
open my mind
slow surrender
the wintery sunrise
resonates in my head
baroque music
guitar's sound
in my ears
cloudy weather
raindrops
he can't hear
notes
daily routine
the sound of cars
mix with Bach
winter routine
notes freezing before
reaching his ear
bad habits
the music goes on
yelling at him
hearing music
to escape his problems
good habits
musical training
the pianist singing
an old discussion
fast notes
the pianist
fainting
fast notes
he can't hide
his tears
tears flow
like raindrops
falling notes
more raindrops
the pianist plays
his piano louder
counterpoint
the fugue above
that discussion
a singing bird
falls from his nest
requiem
car accident
the coda of his life
clearly seen
playing music
he ends it
in the wrong key
breaking up the harmony
of their relationship
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Yep, a haiku chain about music, ending with a tanka. I had that random burst of inspiration that everyone talk about, you know. Comments are more than welcome!
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Music-ku is wonderful. And music-ku involving Bach = even better.