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Seven Deadly Sins - Wrath

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breaking up
instead of crying
he smiles
~mreid973 gave me the wonderful idea of continue writing about the seven deadly sins - I'm going to do at least one haiku/senryu/tanka for each one of them.

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Nice. I like how "breaking up" can be interpreted multiple ways, and the smile in this instance is quite sinister.