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Literature Text
spring morning
the piano hides
a doorclick –
he leaves me
for someone else
the piano hides
a doorclick –
he leaves me
for someone else
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Such a brief moment and such a small sound but such great heartbreak - you have combined it with the brevity of a tanka beautifully.